I think in my first draft I did better at arguing some of my key points than others. For my first key point, I presented a good amount of information and brought up points that would allow the other party to reflect on their own experiences. I think helping someone to connect to their own memories allows them to see your side more clearly. I will probably go back and try to figure out how to connect my other key points the same way.
I plan to go back and revise a few of my key points to include the above tactic. I think they need this revision to help create a better understanding of where I am coming from and to successfully persuade an opposing party. I also plan to review my conclusion to see if I can not add more information to make it more thoroughly drive my point home.
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