W8 Assignment: Revising an Academic Rough Draft from week 6
“Dieting Makes People Fat”
To get a feel for revision, please review the sample student essay, below, from Week 6. This time, you can see both the student’s original draft and the revised final draft. Note how the student did more than correct format and grammatical errors. The entire approach to the argument was improved after the student considered feedback from his instructor and classmates.Sample Researched Argument
First DraftSample Researched Argument 1