Observational record


I need to make some correction on a Journal. The question was :

 Choose one observational record. Explain how you used that record to create an activity in the classroom. Was it helpful? In what way? If it wasn’t helpful, what other observational record would you have used? Or would you have chosen a different activity?  

Attached is the journal that I wrote. The teacher said that it was missing: How did you record these observations?