There are still concerns that are not addressed — particularly how a survey of perceptions can confirm the value of BI-influenced decision quality. You would need some way to show that those perceptions are associated with construction project outcomes that have used BI. This is not clear in your methodology. Also need to still work on problem statement, particularly because you later show in your lit review that BI and decision-making outcomes have already been validated as associated. A comment resolution matrix would be helpful for the next submission. See your chair comments below, too.